Right before I jumped into the shower, I suddenly had a jolt of creativity, and when I came back, I sat down at my laptop and plucked away at the keystrokes until I scene popped out. This is a first person story; which is so weird for me, 'cause I normally don't write first person stories. In this scene the guy is going through a first kiss with a new fella' and it is... well, you'll see.
Well, enough hype, here it is...
It was the strangest sensation I had ever felt in my entire life; it was like something had taken over my brain and poke around there until I couldn’t help but giggle. I was standing in the pouring rain, my short black hair sticking against my peach colored skin. It was April, and I didn’t really have the time to tan like I had last year. The rain that drenched my hair did the same to my clothes, a light green polo and sandy khaki shorts. You would think that I would have watched the news this morning; that maybe I would grab an umbrella or even a parka, but yet, here I stood in the down pour of water.
Amazingly, though, I was giggling through the rain, when I should have been cursing myself for being so blonde. My giggles only ended when a gentle hand suddenly held my chin. I looked up at a pair of gorgeous grass-green eyes and my smile faded, but it was more of a stillness than a fear I was feeling. I closed my eyes as man’s head etched towards mine, and suddenly I was so deeply lost in his power. Our lips met for what seemed like forever. My mind was no longer mine. I stood there, motionless in the rain, lost in this man’s kiss. It had been so long since I had been kissed, that it was like having my kissing virginity taken from me again, only this time it was so much more sensual than with Daniel in the barn. It suddenly ended, much too soon for my liking. I stared at him and was sure he knew I was mindless at that moment. He didn’t smile, and neither did I. We stood, looking at each other for a few seconds when a car pulled to us.
I want your opinion on it... 'cause I appreciate your opinion. This MIGHT be something I go into as a future career, so as much feedback (please though, keep the criticisms at a constructive levels... I don't feel like crying anytime soon) as possible would be fabulous.
++current mood: Proud, with a dash of desire to twirl.
++current music: When You Believe//Whitney Houston
